The comments I received in VoiceThread were very positive and helpful. It was suggested that I add in a focus on the character's angry face during her thrashing of the router in order to avoid repetition in my shots; I was also advised to add some extra time on the ending slides for the viewers to register what they were reading. I took both of these suggestions and edited my video to incorporate them.
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Model: Holly T.
ALSO, check out the videos my friend Stephanie made, featuring me!